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Knight of Jerusalem
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Joined: Sat Dec 22, 2007 10:04 am Location: High Desert, Elko NV Blog: View Blog (0) |
actually i agree with you. especially about jack being too perfect. i will consider your words (along with all the other comments i've gotten) when i do the rewrite. thanks for the input.
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last night - well yesterday afternoon , really, I came down out of the Medicine Bow National Forest from Colo / Wyoming and at the bottom of the hills was a sign at an intersection - Mountain Home was one way - and i realized i was driving through this story.
Beautiful country. As I type I am connected to the wireless network of a Holiday Inn Express somewher West of Omaha. ... Long way to go yet to get home. - I miss the smell of Salt Air. ... but my new puppy is a beauty. |
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You sir, have a very good mind and way of expressing your self. I have completed your story and hated to see it end. Your friend is talented also. I really enjoyed both. I also learned a few new ideas and that is why I am here. I also have enjoyed this site and still have a lot of reading (learning) to do. thanks much...erne
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Knight of Jerusalem
Posts: 2490
Joined: Sat Dec 22, 2007 10:04 am Location: High Desert, Elko NV Blog: View Blog (0) |
i'm glad i could open your mind to new possibilities...that was the point of writing this. if it was also enjoyable, that is a bonus.
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Most enjoyable read, thank you for taking time to write it .
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Hey, I'm new to this board. Definitely a great read.
Thanks for posting it! |
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That was GREAT! I don't think you need to change anything. When your reading a story and it makes you feel like your there thats a great story. Also it was very interesting, I usually don't read stuff like that, but it got my attention forcing me to finish it lol. Great story try and get it finished I'm looking forward to the ending.
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love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now I have to get back reading..... |
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It was really good (so far). I actually cried at one part, which I won't revieal. I am actually trying to become a Christian (after finding Buddhism made me more angry and worried), so this story helps me collect my self, and motivate me to learn about religion and prepping. I think then ten commandments are good rules, and I already follow the nine nobel virtues and the 8 fold path.
Good work, half way through now.
P.S. I WANT THAT SILO!!! |
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No disrespect to you or your story Christian but I stopped reading at chapter 7......only goodness will save the world and not religion.
If you want to read another survivalist adventure camuflage religion then read one by Pat Roberson......... THE END OF THE AGE. Good luck with your story. |
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